Evaluation Q4

Question four – How successful was the script and nine key frames in achieving its aims?

The aim of the script was to show a disruption of the sequel of One Day. I did this pretty well, by using the same female characters name in the original film, Jasmine; this helped show the narrative connections between the two films. I also made this character act in a similar way that her father’s friend did from the original film as this is what she is meant to be able to do. I also included the drinking habits that Jasmine’s father has in One Day for her partner to have too.

I showed the disruption in the script being them revealing true feelings out, though Jasmine doesn’t want the feelings to be out in the air as she isn’t sure about the situation as he reminds her of her Father too much. This is an awkward scene in the film and through the script, I successfully showed this awkwardness well.

The aim of the nine key frames was to visually pick out important parts of the script and show what the film would look like. I did this successfully as I picked out parts that I found significant visually within the script and photographed these key moments in the shots that would have been used for this kind of film.

The lighting that I used helped me successfully show what the film would visually look like as it was soft and really represented the film well.